• Account deleted 5 years ago

    Well seeing as this is designer news:

    The noise on it is distracting The clouds in the background are distracting (on the app) The clouds in the background are annoying (on the dribbble background)

    Reduce it's size by like 15% then put it on a very dark blue/almost black background with the logo in like, #FEFEFE or #111111 and it'll have a much better impact. The actual shape of the logo is pretty cool and unique, so let that shine through without all the added visual junk. Design for your product, not for dribbble.

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    • Mathias Adam, 5 years ago

      Definitely! thanks for the feedback. Back to white paper for the next version ;)

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  • Phil RauPhil Rau, 5 years ago

    I agree, there's too much going on. I'd consider making the "n'" the primary element, and maybe try blurring it a little to give the impression of falling asleep while viewing it.

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    • Mathias Adam, 5 years ago

      Thanks, guys for the feedback. I hesitated for a while about the clouds. I'll probably try something much simple on the next version.

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  • Thomas Michael SemmlerThomas Michael Semmler, 5 years ago

    it's a white noise app isn't it

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  • Dan WilkinsonDan Wilkinson, 5 years ago

    [enter generic Dribbble comment here]

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