I am looking for some critical feedback on the first iteration of my portfolio www.mattgiacino.com. I am looking for Jr. level positions and look to get some insight on how I can better portray myself (and my work) to more experienced designers that have probably looked at hundreds of portfolios.
I think the biggest criticism I have is that this portfolio shows you don't have the strongest grasp on great typography. (Extremely long line-lengths being the biggest offender here.) If you can strengthen that, I think it will be quite nice.
Really like the Homepage, Gallery Portal case study, and your resume layout.
I would recommend removing the "Description Coming Soon!" from the Inbox App project and just leave it blank until you have a description written.
Would love to see more screens and animations from the Tesla app, looks slick.
I think it's good enough for junior positions.
As for the work, I'd remove UI exercises and leave a case study.