7 comments

  • Aubrey JohnsonAubrey Johnson, 9 months ago

    3 clicks to see any work - that was a tricky one for me.

    As Lee said, you've gotta "wow" or at least give me something on that first page.

    7 points
  • Lee AraújoLee Araújo, 9 months ago

    A portfolio by itself must show the quality of your work, without showing it... Looking only at first page, it's not very appealing and the text doesn't invite to read. I think you have a good work but you are not showing it the best way.

    1 point
  • Trevor Kay, 9 months ago

    I honestly don't need all the preamble about you, just get me to your work as quickly as possible.

    1 point
  • Diederik Eenschooten, 9 months ago

    All feedback is appreciated!

    1 point
  • Stepan Velichko, 9 months ago

    Looks like you trying to follow brutal style (or you need to try it), but couldn't.

    0 points
  • Diederik Eenschooten, 9 months ago

    Thank you so much for the feedback! I'll work on it again this weekend!

    0 points
  • Mike StevensonMike Stevenson, 9 months ago

    Try showing some of your work on your home page. Also a lot of white space on the right side on large browser windows. White space is fine but that seems like a bit too much.

    0 points