Portfolio - Harrison Telyan

over 6 years ago from Harrison Telyan, Designer

Hey People!

Yesterday, my homeboy from RISD, Jake Cooper (hai Jake!!), posted his awesome portfolio on here and inspired me to share mine too. I've always been a lurker on here, but have admired how the community is always willing to give feedback and support fellow designers. Would y'all be willing to crit my work?

www.harrisontelyan.com

What can I work on?
What do I need to learn?
What's missing that should be there?
If you had a magic wand, what would you change about it?
What do you like (if anything) and would like to see more of? Etc.

Thank you! :)

10 comments

Mike Sarcone-Roach, over 6 years ago
I would feature your name, location and desired employment more prominently. More context for your involvement & process for the projects would be great. It would also be nice to see a distinction between student and professional work.
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- Harrison Telyan, over 6 years ago
  Thanks man! Appreciate the feedback, esp. the distinction between the two bodies of work :)
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Roman Pohorecki, over 6 years ago
You should edit it down and make sure the images in the right pane upscale a bit on larger monitors. Overall, sharp layout.
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- Harrison Telyan, over 6 years ago
  That's so funny, my friend said the same thing earlier this morning! I guess great minds think alike! Thanks for the feedback, Roman :)
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Artur Eldib, over 6 years ago
Show your process, your train of thought in each case study, and show how you can improve your customer's success.
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- Harrison Telyan, over 6 years ago
  That's good feedback. Thank you, Artur. :)
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Francis Onwumere, over 6 years ago
Looks neat! Good job!
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- Harrison Telyan, over 6 years ago
  Thank you, Francis!
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Jake Cooper, over 6 years ago
Thanks for the hat-tip Harrison! Your site is nice and clean. My only criticism is to integrate some copy that explains what types of work you like to do, or what problems you can solve for others.
Great job!
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- Harrison Telyan, over 6 years ago
  You're welcome and likewise! That's good feedback, I'll be sure to update that this weekend. Gracias, Jake :)
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