• Kyle ConradKyle Conrad, over 4 years ago

    I'd take another look at your copy - you have "I'm" and then "i've" in the opening paragraph, and the 2nd and 3rd sentences are basically redundant. The last sentence is a few fragments put together but not a coherent thought. The copy by the contact form just kind of ends - there's no period in the last sentence. Best bet is to find a friend or copywriter you can pay to help tighten it up.

    5 points
  • Ryan MorrisonRyan Morrison, over 4 years ago

    Woo! Another great designer using Webflow

    3 points
  • Stevie EStevie E, over 4 years ago

    Great case studies.

    Small tweak, you are missing gutters on the case study pages on mobile, content sits flush with the frame.

    2 points
  • Tim Resudek, over 4 years ago

    Looks like you exported images at 800px but you're rendering them at 760px which is causing them to look blurrier than they should. I'd adjust that so your export equals your max display width.

    1 point
  • Vince Angeloni, over 4 years ago

    Here's my hiring manager input: I think you did a good job relaying what you achieved on each of your projects and your process as well. One thing that sticks out to me that I like to see when viewing portfolios is splitting up your designs (instead of bulking them into 8 screenshots and just a single paragraph of text) and explaining your thought process. For example, take a screenshot and add some commentary on the problems you faced, how you solved them. Maybe focus on your big 'wins' with a project.

    Good work! Good luck!

    0 points
  • mateusz hauer, over 4 years ago

    wouldbe nice to see this projects 1:1 in real view.

    0 points
  • Jonathan Kelley, over 4 years ago

    Hey everyone - just want to say a massive thank you for all your feedback and pointing out bugs on my end. Trust me - my trello board is full and I'm very happy about that.

    0 points
  • Tom ReinertTom Reinert, over 4 years ago

    Please don't use a script font for your own name. If you paint it yourself, it will be much stronger.

    0 points
  • Cory MalnarickCory Malnarick, over 4 years ago

    This portfolio is good as heck!

    There are some grammar errors in your footer contact paragraph. Watch out!

    Otherwise, super clean, loads fast. Where's your resume?

    0 points
  • Michael Ortali, over 4 years ago

    Lots of good comments on here. On a side note, I run www.creativelist.io, which is a creative search engine. Feel free to add your website to our index - it's free!

    0 points
  • Markus BerghMarkus Bergh, over 4 years ago

    I would give the text on the subpages some room on smaller screens, such as a mobile phone. Also some consistency with the margins between text and content.

    Maybe the contact link on the subpage should lead directly to the form if you'd like visitors to fill it in. I don't think professionals would ever enter a crazy nickname so look into the placeholders as well.

    Maybe you could also add some lazy loading.

    Well done with the case studies!

    0 points
  • Christopher Mansfield, over 4 years ago

    Hey, Jonathan

    Looking good, I would recommend taking a second look at your input fields. The labels makes the placeholder text redundant in my opinion.

    0 points
    • Jonathan KelleyJonathan Kelley, over 4 years ago

      Hey Christopher,

      Thanks for checking it out, the labels are for accessibility reasons really. I could get rid of them or change them to be a bit more targeted e.g. 'Enter your name' then the field could be e.g. Jonny Cash

      1 point
      • Christopher Mansfield, over 4 years ago

        You are welcome. I think it's important that the label and placeholder synergise and don't simply repeat.

        I can see it especially adding value in the project description area if you added some guidelines to help you screen clients.

        0 points
  • Jonathan Kelley, over 4 years ago

    Any feedback DN is always appreciated.

    0 points