11 comments

  • Emanuel S.Emanuel S., 7 years ago

    Having your Instagram featured on the website and your profile private, maybe not the best idea!

    5 points
  • Jesse HeadJesse Head, 7 years ago (edited 7 years ago )

    Would you say dance is still a big part of your life? Is it important that visitors realise you're passionate about it?

    4 points
    • , 7 years ago

      That got me thinking and I will reconsider. Thank you! :)

      0 points
      • Jesse C.Jesse C., 7 years ago

        I personally like it being in there. It's short paragraph, it was a big part of your life, etc. I like ballet though!

        1 point
      • Giulio MichelonGiulio Michelon, 7 years ago

        It's the first thing that I read when I arrive on your site. I didn't even realized that you were a designer, I thought that the list were the places where you will exhibit next.

        You should definitely put that in the bottom and not in the first place.

        2 points
      • Joseph Decker, 7 years ago (edited 7 years ago )

        Jesse Head has a great point, think of it in a way of communicating your inspiration to your visitor — for instance ballet could have a great impact on your design in matter of balance, natural excellence of the silhouette, even the difficult and hard to learn control of your body for those amazing movements (motion design).

        I want to point out that people get their inspiration from everything — perhaps dancing is one of yours.

        Keep making, breaking and elevating — just do it! :)

        0 points
  • Mohit KoduriMohit Koduri, 7 years ago

    Nice! Simple and straight-forward, love it. The Bio is a bit awkwardly phrased. Not the content itself but just how it's structured and present for example, the jump from Ballet and Dancing to Arts and Design is abrupt.

    So only advice would be to clean up the language a bit, maybe but otherwise awesome.

    1 point
  • Tyler TreadwellTyler Treadwell, 7 years ago

    Very Simple and Clean, I like it :) Well done keep it up!

    1 point
  • Ian WilliamsIan Williams, 7 years ago

    Typo - "Joones" ;)

    0 points