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Show DN: My Food Journey

5 years ago from , Digital Designer & Co-founder @ Pendium

Hi guys,

I just did a soft launch of my food blog and wanted some constructive feedback on the design/front-end from you peeps.

Link: http://www.myfoodjourney.com

Thanks!

2 comments

  • Christopher HenriksenChristopher Henriksen, 5 years ago

    Looking really nice! The menu button doesn't do anything for me unless I resize my browser window to the middle breakpoint or less, so maybe just get rid of it on larger screens?

    The body text should have a set max-width, as for me the line length is way over what most people would find comfortable. Counting 23 words on the first line here. Image alt

    Sizing down my browser window solves the problem, but then the text size gets a bit small. Down from 1.2em to 1em. I find the bigger a lot more comfortable to read :)

    Even so, you did manage to make me miss Paramount Coffee Project a lot, even though I have only had the pleasure of being there once.

    Good work! :)

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    • Daniel Mui, 5 years ago

      Didn't think anyone would response to me ha! Thanks for the collated feedback, it's been helpful.

      The menu button was something I was deciding on whether or not to get rid of from larger screens. Will definitely keep testing to see what works and what doesn't :)

      Thanks again!

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