5 comments

  • Joshua Eichler-SummersJoshua Eichler-Summers, almost 9 years ago

    Hey. Nice site! I think your copy could do with some strengthening though.

    'The world of two adventurers, set on course of endless exploration. Searching for new ways to improve, doing what we love the most… Creating with ambitions sky high.'

    I didn't know what you are!? An agency I assume - but this left me confused not reassured that you were going to be the people to make my product. [Also - as a customer I'm not looking for you to improve, I'm looking for you to get my project done well.]

    'OUR FIRST PROJECT EVER! AH, WE WERE SO YOUNG... BUT WE LEARNED A FEW TRICKS 2011 THE FIRST REAL JOB, WITH REAL MONEY INVOLVED. AND THE PHONE STARTS RINGING 2012 OVER 217458 PROJECTS AND 70K CLIENTS LATER... ;-) STILL PASSIONATE 2013 WORKING ON SEVERAL INTERESTING PROJECTS TOP SECRET KINDA STUFF.'

    Are any of these bits lies? The first two make me feel you are unprofessional. The part about 217,458 projects and 70k clients.... doesn't sound real after what seems like an amateur beginning, and feels very unreal when you're working on only several interesting projects in 2013.

    I assume it is a joke! But it's one that doesn't make too much sense to me. As a client, I want you to have lots of projects and experience. I don't want you to joke about it.

    The bits where you insult each other... again I'm not a fan. Feels a bit odd if you're trying to sell me your skills.

    The initials in bubbles under your bios I also think could be improved. UX, PS, AI. Non technical people don't know what these things are! And PS and AI fall into different skillets as UX I feel, so I was left a little confused as to what PS and AI were at first.

    Very beautiful site! But think it will get much better if the words tighten up.

    4 points
    • Oskar GdaniecOskar Gdaniec, over 8 years ago

      Hey, you know, there are people who know what 'fun' and 'sarcasm' means. That site is very personal.

      0 points
    • Christy Lee N.Christy Lee N., over 8 years ago

      I agree with some of this, especially wording it to market to non-designers.

      Average everyday people will overlook some of this and get confused when reading.

      0 points
  • Ivan VásquezIvan Vásquez, over 8 years ago

    It asks for credentials :(

    0 points
  • Leon KennedyLeon Kennedy, almost 9 years ago

    Nice website, I love the parallax scrolling and animations on this one. I just keep reading it as design-eat instead of what I think is supposed to be design-neat.

    0 points