• Fulgenzia Delucci, 11 months ago

    I really like your style. Very clear and straight to the point. It gives the main idea of each section clearly. Especially with articles like this (which are kinda too long), simple images with light colors are like a fresh breath of air.

    On the side note, don't we have enough churches and more than enough worldly problems to deal with??

    3 points
    • Luna EclipseLuna Eclipse, 11 months ago

      Hey, thanks a lot! Glad you like it :)

      1 point
    • Alison Bustos, 11 months ago

      I'm guessing we should focus on the illustrations here. I don't see the point of criticizing churches and claiming that they cause problems! You should tear down all these presumptions that keep us from loving each other. Just remember the essence of religion is based on non-violence and it is the only thing that we have in our lives that we can depend on.

      By the way I also find the illustrations very enlightening.

      3 points
    • austen m, 11 months ago

      I read it as "How To Start A Cult (with Jotform)" lol, but nonetheless fantastic illustrations OP!

      3 points
  • Jim RenaudJim Renaud, 11 months ago

    Could be cool to try some textures in the illustration. Would make them a bit warmer, less flat. However, these are nice for an article.

    2 points
  • Stuart McCoyStuart McCoy, 11 months ago

    Needs more spaghetti and meatballs, and colanders.

    1 point
  • David ThornDavid Thorn, 11 months ago

    I'd try to make the style match from image to image, as some have fine details like the donation box one with the hand having more realistic shading, but everywhere else is a fairly flat/geometric rendering.

    Also the icons in the illustrations don't really match between images.

    1 point
  • Trev MorrisTrev Morris, 11 months ago

    I have no desire to talk about religion here but holy moly there's a lot that goes into setting one of those things up...

    One point around the header image - I think more could have been done to illustrate what's being discussed in the article - Could you have done more of an exploded-view, like Apple would do on their latest iDevice? Or like a Haynes manual?

    0 points
    • Luna Eclipse, 11 months ago

      Oh, interesting point. I didn't understand exactly, why would I do that? I don't think that this article has any kind of technical details.

      0 points