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6 years ago from Benjamin Fritz, Designer @ Tweek

  • Daniel FeldtDaniel Feldt, 6 years ago (edited 6 years ago )

    Pleasantly surprised.

    "Pleasantly" is an adverb. Adverbs weaken your verbs. Replace with a more descriptive verb. For example, change "He walked slowly" to "He tip-toed".

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