Please critique my landing (it's a design tool to give feedback to developers)

almost 2 years ago from Ahmed Sulaiman, Head of Abstract SDK Product & Engineering. Designer + Developer + Harmonica Player

  • Steve O'ConnorSteve O'Connor, almost 2 years ago

    Agree with others - you need that CTA button to have a contrasting colour to the orange in order for it to stand out. Landing page CTA design 101!

    The copy needs a little sharpening.

    Give Flawless Feedback to your developers macOS tool to leave comments on the iOS app faster. No more making dozens of screenshots

    Could be

    Give flawless feedback to your developers Leave comments on iOS apps faster and say goodbye to annotating screenshots all day.

    No one has said anything about accessibility… that orange and white combination is not accessible at any size or combination. The contrast ratio is only 1.69. The easiest way around it would be to use black on the orange instead of white, and also add underlines to your links on focus.

    But you could use a tool like this to generate an accessible palette instead: Confrere a11y test

    You've also removed outline from all links. Something designers love to do (I was guilty for years) but this makes it difficult for keyboard users to use your site by tabbing. If you use a:active {outline:none;} then the outline is hidden for everyone except keyboard users.

    Good luck with the project :)

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    • Ahmed Sulaiman, almost 2 years ago

      Landing page CTA design 101

      I already learned this lesson. No more same color CTA buttons, I promise. Took this fix in our sprint. Should have new button pretty soon.

      Give flawless feedback to your developers Leave comments on iOS apps faster and say goodbye to annotating screenshots all day.

      I like it! You made my job much easy

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