Please critique my landing (it's a design tool to give feedback to developers)

almost 2 years ago from Ahmed Sulaiman, Head of Abstract SDK Product & Engineering. Designer + Developer + Harmonica Player

  • T. F., almost 2 years ago

    Agree with the vertical padding of content areas, though disagree with the menu and font. I like the bold font as differentiator for the menu, and the font's elegant, however you definitely need more line-height for your headings. Well, for the footer/last call to action I like that's an attention grabber, but the text is too unreadable contrast wise.

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    • Ahmed Sulaiman, almost 2 years ago

      hey, T. F. (sorry don't know your name)

      I like the bold font as differentiator for the menu, and the font's elegant, however you definitely need more line-height for your headings

      oh, this typography makes me crazy. I don't see those nuances. Will go to our freelance designer to ask (he is my friend, working in the same office).

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