Please critique my landing (it's a design tool to give feedback to developers)

almost 2 years ago from Ahmed Sulaiman, Head of Abstract SDK Product & Engineering. Designer + Developer + Harmonica Player

  • T. F., almost 2 years ago

    Great, clean design. Gets to the point fast, which is always good. Like the simple color choice (maybe the yellow tone could be a bit stronger/deeper). Footer has some spacing problems to the adjacent button. Copy is quite alright in what info it tries to get across, but as you said, needs to be rephrased (if you like, maybe I could do a quick rewrite). Also, how did you get the client testimonials: are these people you actually know or just some examples? Keep up the good work.

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    • Ahmed Sulaiman, almost 2 years ago

      Thanks for your feedback! To follow up on your comments:

      Also, how did you get the client testimonials: are these people you actually know or just some examples?

      It's real people, who played with the prototype. We firstly made user testing with showing prototype, explaining features. Then we move to deeper development and landing.

      The good-enough MVP should be ready in 2-3 weeks, so we will give it to the wider public.

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    • Ahmed Sulaiman, almost 2 years ago

      Footer has some spacing problems to the adjacent button.

      what do you mean by adjacent button?

      Copy is quite alright in what info it tries to get across, but as you said, needs to be rephrased (if you like, maybe I could do a quick rewrite).

      thanks for this! for now, we will rewrite it based on all the feedback we got. So we should have a better version. Then I probably will ask for help with this part.

      I'm from Ukraine, that's why my copy sounds not really natural. It's our task before the actual release

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