Please critique my landing (it's a design tool to give feedback to developers)

almost 2 years ago from Ahmed Sulaiman, Designer + Developer + Harmonica Player, Make of crosspatch.io

  • Ahmed Sulaiman, almost 2 years ago

    thanks, Jan!

    Do you think more colors will make it look better?

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    • Jan SemlerJan Semler, almost 2 years ago

      Happy to help. I wouldn't think more color is better, there are two ways i think.

      1. Another Color for contrast
      2. Reduce Yellow to get more attention on yellow buttons or contents (depending on what you want)

      For example:

      Figma They use green on their frontpage for buttons and purple/orange for areas n stuff. So the visitor will instantly know what the green button does.

      In your case it is to much yellow so i don't really see the button or other cta.

      Get me?

      *edit: would > wouldn't

      4 points
      • Ahmed Sulaiman, almost 2 years ago

        oh... Now I see it. CTA buttons, indeed, are totally in the same color as all the rest. Yellow world.

        So strange, that I didn't notice it before!

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      • Ahmed Sulaiman, almost 2 years ago

        hey, Jan!

        We talked with my team and will fix many things, you have mentioned.

        Reduce Yellow to get more attention on yellow buttons or contents (depending on what you want)

        We will change button colors.

        buttons or links got hover states.

        added to the sprint too!

        A bit more whitespace in the content area between the blocks would be helpful.

        Will do this. Many people pointed it out, as well.

        thanks again.

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