Site Design: Time's Up Now(timesupnow.com)

almost 4 years ago from ChrisArchitec t, webdev, ops & solver of things

  • Adam Fisher-CoxAdam Fisher-Cox, almost 4 years ago

    Crap layout/mixed messages is not a valid critique. Explain what's wrong and bring some solutions to the table here. Didn't notice the JPGs which certainly need to be addressed.

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    • Account deleted almost 4 years ago

      okay, here you go:

      Crap layout = massive page of text straight under the hero area - Users will be put off because they cant be bothered reading a massive wall of text. Break it up with images like every single other website has figure out have to do.

      Next, the left then right aligned section has ugly (subjective) lines leading the viewer - could've used a cleaner set up here and relied on implied lines to leader the viewer around.

      next section is alright, but probably could've been done better. Maybe use some icons or images or something to switch up the layout, because its another massive section of text, which will be off-putting to users

      Scrolling down, more non-retina images that look blurry.

      after that, another huge wall of text. Could use something to show relevant information, accordions perhaps?

      under additional trusted resources, more non-retina, unaligned images

      what you can do: ANOTHER wall of text

      under that, more wonky lines, contrasting with lines on in the background

      down the bottom, a random curvy line that's come out of nowhere and is completely at odds with the visual style of the rest of the site

      also, throughout the whole thing is times new roman (again subjective, but come on, even Trajan would've worked better here), with kerning all over place in different sections.

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