almost 3 years ago from Philip Lester, CEO @ Dreamten & GiveForms

  • Mattan IngramMattan Ingram, almost 3 years ago

    The illustration at the top is great, but overall the aesthetic feels too "clean" and you don't use any illustrations like that elsewhere.

    I'd try adding a couple more illustrations and perhaps taking some inspiration from actual pastel crayon material and how it sort of smears and crumbles a bit at the edges.

    I think a hint of texture like that could do a lot to make things stand out from other white-space heavy brands.

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