I’d love some feedback on my landing page(citationsy.com)

almost 4 years ago from Cenk Özbakır, Founder, Citationsy

  • Tom ReinertTom Reinert, almost 4 years ago

    I like it, the design fits the message.

    I think you can work on your claim ("Perhaps the worlds..."). It can be stronger by making a promise to the reader or telling them why they should use it. (Like invision says: "DESIGN BETTER. FASTER. TOGETHER." instad of "The worlds best prototyping tool.")

    Also, the screen-capture is a little too fast. It feels rushed and it's hard to follow the functionality. Maybe reduce it to the core function, displaying key benefits.

    A tiny, tiny splash of colour wouldn't hurt.

    Maybe include a call to action in the header.

    10 points
    • Cenk Özbakır, almost 4 years ago

      That makes sense … a proper slogan might work better. I’ll try to come up with one. Thanks!

      1 point
    • Cenk Özbakır, almost 4 years ago

      Speaking of colour, what do you think of the greenish colour that the buttons have now? Do you think a different colour might work better?

      3 points
      • Account deleted almost 4 years ago

        Impossible to tell this without testing. I'd focus less on the CTA color and more on the color-scheme of the site brand. Start then with a CTA color that works well with the design and test it. There are a few tools out there that will let you easily do this and get real data back on what gets better click-throughs or not.

        Keep in mind too that that's pretty much only the beginning of the funnel. You'll soon find yourself optimizing the transactional flow as well! Hehehe.

        2 points
    • Joao Carvalho, almost 4 years ago

      Agree that the screen-capture is a bit fast and the phrase is a bit pretentious and could tell more the value proposition of using this tool. Overall, passes a clear message

      0 points