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over 4 years ago from Jonathan Kelley, Freelance Designer

  • Kyle ConradKyle Conrad, over 4 years ago

    I'd take another look at your copy - you have "I'm" and then "i've" in the opening paragraph, and the 2nd and 3rd sentences are basically redundant. The last sentence is a few fragments put together but not a coherent thought. The copy by the contact form just kind of ends - there's no period in the last sentence. Best bet is to find a friend or copywriter you can pay to help tighten it up.

    5 points