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Show DN: Portfolio — Adrien Gervaix

over 6 years ago from Adrien Gervaix, Designer

  • Daniel De LaneyDaniel De Laney, over 6 years ago

    Nice work. I’ve taken the liberty of minimally editing your About section so that it looks like something a native speaker might write:

    I’m a 26 years old designer who like to work with hyperlink, slider or dropdown menu. These past months, I mainly worked on Collect.io as a side project and Dartagnan at Bmobile. I’ve worked in different design fields from webdesign to motion design and mainly in small agency. I’m focused on giving the easiest experience to the user on all of his devices. I like to research and organise the results to create wireframes and prototypes.

    I’m a 26 year old designer who likes to work with hyperlinks, sliders, and dropdown menus. These past months I’ve been working on my side project Collect.io, and Dartagnan at Bmobile. I’ve worked in different design fields from web design to motion design, mainly as part of a small agency. I’m focused on giving the easiest experience to the user on all of his devices. I like to research, and organise the results to create wireframes and prototypes.

    In my path to greatest adventure, I'm looking for a fulltime designer job in an agency with an awesome team, where I will fulfil my appetite from design through challenging projects in North America.

    In my search for great adventure, I'm looking for a full-time designer job in an agency with an awesome team, where I will fulfill my appetite for design through challenging projects in North America.

    I'm one of those who think that designer should code, not actually do the developpement but at least understand how everything works. That's why I'm developping my front end skills. I have also some 3D design knowledge that I want to improve because, you know, VR is coming.

    I'm one of those who think that designers should code—not actually do the development, but at least understand how everything works. That's why I'm developing my front end skills. I have also some 3D design knowledge that I want to improve because, you know, VR is coming.

    When I’m not lurking on Reddit, I enjoy watching movies like Fast and Furious, not getting any better at Hearthstone, doing sports like Badminton, double mainly, and other stuffs.

    When I’m not lurking on Reddit, I enjoy watching movies like Fast and Furious, not getting any better at Hearthstone, doing sports like Badminton (double mainly) and other stuff.

    You can contact me by email, follow me on Twitter or Dribbble, why not on Spotify or on my non-updated Linkedin and my Medium is empty, yet.

    You can contact me by email, follow me on Twitter or Dribbble, or on Spotify or my non-updated LinkedIn. My Medium is empty right now.

    Follow me on and Dribbble

    Follow me on Dribbble

    31 points
    • Adrien GervaixAdrien Gervaix, over 6 years ago

      Wow! I will definitively add these modifications. Thanks a lot!

      2 points
      • Powers Gray, over 6 years ago

        "I’m focused on giving the easiest experience to the user on all of his devices."

        try

        "I’m focused on giving the easiest experience to the user on all of their devices."

        4 points
      • Ethan BondEthan Bond, over 6 years ago (edited over 6 years ago )

        Powers Gray offered a correction that might seem weird to a non-native speaker so I thought it might be helpful to get an explanation.

        English doesn't have a non-gendered singular pronoun. You refer to people as either "he," or "she." People have historically defaulted to the masculine pronoun, but there's a movement to eliminate this.

        The easiest way to eliminate the gendered pronoun is to do what Powers suggested and replace it with "they," or "their." This is technically grammatically incorrect, since you're talking about a single nongendered subject, but it's a very natural thing that native speakers do all the time.

        I personally try to rewrite sentences such that you avoid the quirk altogether: "I'm focused on giving the easiest experience to every user on every device," or some such thing. This is probably one of the more difficult quirks of English right now, but it's good to be aware of because some people (including clients/employers!) care very passionately about it.

        Sweet portfolio!

        3 points
    • Daniel GoldenDaniel Golden, over 6 years ago

      Wow, that was really kind of you. I'm thankful you're a part of DN.

      2 points
    • Cihad TurhanCihad Turhan, over 6 years ago

      Isn't likes working grammatically correct instead of likes to work ?

      0 points