• Todd SielingTodd Sieling, almost 6 years ago

    Lots to like here. The introductory copy on the home page needs work, though. On the first sentence I thought you designed just for infants, and I liked the clear expression of focus... then realized it didn't line up with the work on the page.

    The text in that area is super-important: people will use it to situate your work in the universe of possible designers. Answering questions like what you focus on, what's distinctive about your work or process, and even narrowing down the kinds of clients you work with, will all help.

    Last note: you ask visitors to check back for new work. The design of this site is so nice that it would look great in a newsletter, so why not offer one so you can show new work to previous visitors who might be interested, but might not know or remember to check back.

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    • Karen Li, almost 6 years ago

      Working on improving my introductory copy right now! as for the newsletter idea, that's pretty awesome, I'll definitely be implementing that

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      • Todd SielingTodd Sieling, almost 6 years ago

        I'm glad it's well-received. After I posted I thought 'jeez maybe that was too harsh, I really do like how the site looks'. If you want eyes on the copy update I'm happy to look at it.

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        • Karen Li, almost 6 years ago

          Thanks for the offer, Todd -- I've just updated the copy if you'd like to check it out

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          • Todd SielingTodd Sieling, almost 6 years ago

            Awesome update, that's great copy. And I signed up for your newsletter. Congrats on going live and getting it out there for feedback.

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