• Martin Wright, 7 years ago (edited 7 years ago )

    It's a good body of work, and there's a lot of it and the design is successful in telling me that quite quickly, however the lack of hierarchy and dense information makes it hard to focus on and digest.

    I'd see if there are two or three works that are more important you could prioritise those somehow, for example make them bigger and build the grid around them.

    Other than that it's smart and feels well polished, the about page could be better - I really want to know more about the artist and get some idea or their personality, especially if I'm planning on sending them work.

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    • Giulio MichelonGiulio Michelon, 7 years ago

      Yep, I'd like to fill the about page more as well but Chiara felt very minimal about it. Since it's in Wordpress and she can modify it I will let her know. Thank you!

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