• Joshua Eichler-SummersJoshua Eichler-Summers, 6 years ago (edited 6 years ago )

    Man! Loved the keyboard thing. Very subtle. Brought a smile to my face. Well done.

    Also really like the intro with you sketching.

    My only negative would be the layout of your work. Found it very unstructured and a bit over complicated.

    I think breaking up the work by different types would be easier to handle and also giving each piece of work a title that you don't only see on hover (where you can no longer see the image).

    E.g.

    Code:

    • w1
    • w1 title

    • w2

    • w2 title

    Art:

    • w1
    • w1 title>

    • w2

    • w2 title

    etc... (but horizontal)

    Cool site tho. Again. Love the keyboard.

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    • Dylan BaskindDylan Baskind, 6 years ago (edited 6 years ago )

      Heya Joshua,

      Thanks for thoughts!

      Haha yeh the keyboard / mouse - you discovered my easter egg :)

      Re: the break-down of the work. Indeed, this was something I went back and forth on repeatedly during the design.

      There was originally an "index" piece that presented the work in a more structured / taxonomical way. Then I ditched it for a randomly sized assemblage. Then flipped back to the site-map concept. Then back to the current format, but grouped by category - but that didn't seem to sing as much, visually.

      Not sure I've really cracked that nut yet.

      PS: Thanks for the broken links heads-up. "Spends A Zillion Hours Creating Site / Links Are Broken" - there's a tee-shirt in there somewhere.

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